I am a Harry Potter fan and Bellatrix Lestrange is one of my favorite characters. I love the angle and the expression, giving it a sadistic, fierce look. The lines are smooth but also rough, and the shading could go a little darker because some pencil shading are light. Add some pen shadings on the neck and the hair to give it a realistic effect, but i also love it's simplicity. When i look at it closely, i see some pencil specks making it a little dirty, but from afar it doesnt seem to notice. and lastly the lips are a little light, try to add more shading and inking so it will look good. I love this piece and keep up the good work
I love how simple, and yet how detailed it is. You capture a bit of Bellatrix's essence in this work, without any color or much shading. I agree that the eyes are absolutely stunning, but so is everything else. A wonderful bit of work, keep at it. <3 Riley.